Saturday, January 16, 2010
day 13:
Original Activity
derrick williams (day 12)
Day 12: Jade Gelskey
So as for this blog post I wanted to look at the other side of what I posted on Day 11's post. I think that this one is more successful then the last and it all fits a lot better in the size and design they choose for both. The sandwiches fill up the entire thing and work with the little white shapes they have around the sign. The text is a little bit stronger then the last as well. The text still appears to small for these types of signs since they are supposed to attract passerbys not some one who is standing a few feet in front of them. And also the text "Crispy Chicken Deluxe" seems to be hugging that white line a little to tightly. Also I am not sure why they hyphenated the "Cheese-burger" on the top. That makes the sign look a little tacky.
The colors again are very bold and would be good to attract people but the design could definitely use a little work.
day twelve: not intended for all to see
I took this picture simply because there was type, I really wasn't giving much attention to what it said or its purpose. I'd have to say that after looking at this a few times, that it does it's job. For something not intended to be eye-catching by the public, it is designed well. It is readable, clear, & its hierarchy contributes to that. It's funny how I almost walked right passed it. Yet, I know that so many people already have.
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