In my poster, I really tried to play with lost and found lines and level changes. I wanted to have the words “not” and “enough” stand out. I tried to play with a different kind of gradient not just the typical gradient and I tried to blend colors together. With my typeface, it was to be big, bold and sharp so that it reflected “The Boss”.
Shannon,
ReplyDeleteI think your solution is excellent and works a lot better then your previous one. I think you really figured out a good way to work with the suggestions everyone made last time.
Your type is fantastic and is done in such a way that reflects your artist and still stays true to your style.
The colors work well and I think they re in force the theme.
There are a couple of concerns I see though. The first concern is the "d" in good. I think it gets pretty lost in the type and is difficult to read. Maybe its not an issue but just a heads up as far as that.
The other one I see is under the little tick on the left side of the "n" in not there is a little glint of light. While this definitely gives it dimension I am not seeing this echoed in other places. Maybe bring this out some where else in your type so it seems intentional.
Good job though.
Your poster looking awesome! I really love the colors you chose. As with Jade, that's one of the first things I noticed was the "d" in good.
ReplyDeleteAlso, I'm not 100% on this but I think, "THATS" needs have an apostrophe, "That's" meaning "That is not good enough." Just a heads up.
I think it is looking fantastic besides those two things! :)